Comments on: How to write a thesis for my comparison essay? http://www.thegodofhellfire.com/comparison/how-to-write-a-thesis-for-my-comparison-essay/ absolute evil Sun, 05 Feb 2012 10:19:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Peter P http://www.thegodofhellfire.com/comparison/how-to-write-a-thesis-for-my-comparison-essay/#comment-7876 Peter P Sat, 21 Nov 2009 13:03:59 +0000 http://www.thegodofhellfire.com/comparison/how-to-write-a-thesis-for-my-comparison-essay#comment-7876 A thesis should pin point exactly what you are trying to prove in your essay. Are you really trying to prove there are differences between Spring and Fall? You should be more specific. Try to include something in regards to the nature of these differences or the significance of them. You also wrote your sentence wrong. If you want to compare spring and fall you need to say the differences are between them. Here is a possible re-write: "Spring and fall bring about contrasting occurrences, including changes in ones lifestyle, in the weather, and in the length of each day"<br><b>References : </b><br> A thesis should pin point exactly what you are trying to prove in your essay. Are you really trying to prove there are differences between Spring and Fall? You should be more specific. Try to include something in regards to the nature of these differences or the significance of them.

You also wrote your sentence wrong. If you want to compare spring and fall you need to say the differences are between them. Here is a possible re-write:

"Spring and fall bring about contrasting occurrences, including changes in ones lifestyle, in the weather, and in the length of each day"
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